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 Subject :Engineering Student for Internship/Job.. 2009-07-12 23:43:31 
reasonabledoubt
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Please take a look at my resume.  I'm a student and was really excited when I came across this site because I am in the process of creating a better professional resume.  Any feedback would be really helpful.  Be honest!!  Thanks.

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 Subject :Re:Engineering Student for Internship/Job.. 2009-07-15 20:15:16 
estawina
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The profile is pretty good, but you don't need the word "Student" in the title.

Given your newness to the workplace, it's hard to have substantive accomplishments. You obviously tried, but missed the mark because none of the accomplishments relate to engineering. Your first two duties as your last job ("Drafted and reviewed engineering drawings and specifications." and "Assisted in the creation of formal project proposals.") could probably be changed to accomplishments, even if you are sharing in others' accomplishments. See the 'A SAR that leverages a company achievement' section towards the bottom of Powerful Resumes use PARs and SARs for an example.

Check out the creativity techniques to come up with other accomplishments, especially the Personal Memory Support System page. Since you're in college, you could probably trow a hell of a resume party.

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 Subject :Re:Engineering Student for Internship/Job.. 2009-07-16 19:51:26 
reasonabledoubt
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Thanks so much for your input, this site has helped me out a lot!
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