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Hi Allison,
Welcome to Resume Remodel. Usually we would ask you to repost your resume with the contact details removed, but since you also have it posted on your site, the reason for our policy is not relevant in your case.
I agree that your issues are a bit different and your sparse approach seems appropriate. In many ways your titles, tasks and duties seem like impressive accomplishments unto themselves. However, I don't know your industry so I have no insight as to what an executive that hires you would be seeking. You should look at the PARs and SARs page to see if you can be more explicit about your accomplishments.
Your bigger problem may be how you're networking. From the little I know, networking seems more important in your industry that most. Our new Personal Memory Support System creativity exercise could help develop accomplishments while jump starting your networking activities.
I'd be interested in seeing your changes.
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