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Welcome - How to use this board - Please Read   by  on 2009-05-20 08:33:21
 Subject :java coder.. 2009-05-15 03:46:39 
bhooma
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I have attached my resume, please do review my resume

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 Subject :Re:java coder.. 2009-05-17 14:38:07 
SaltTed
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The technical summary is too long to be called a summary. It's more like a list of skills that is similar to and overlaps the technical experience section. The first sentence and last sentences are very good because they talk about about your personality traits in the context of the kind of general skills the employer seeks. In the middle add a sentence or two that characterizes the type of technical skills would make more sense. For example: "A cutting-edge developer experienced in a variety of computer laguages, database technologies, development environments and server technologies."

One example of overlap is "• Experience in working with Relational Database Management systems - Oracle and MySql." overlaps with "Databases: Oracle 8i, MS Access, MySQL". The first takes 11 words where the second only takes six and the first isn't even complete! All sentences should be reviewed with the goal of cutting excess words.

The "Professional Summary" section adds nothing and should be removed completely.

Your Local Pitch business description reads more like a marketing piece for Local Pitch. Reduce it to one or two senetnces simlar to the RapidPoints description.

You do not use PARs or SARs at all. You mention your duties, but not in terms of what you accomplish. See the writeup on PARs and SARs.

The section titles could be improved as follows: Change "Technical Summary" to "Summary" or "Profile", "Technical Experience" to "Technical Skills", "Educational Qualification" to "Education". If you followed the advice in the first paragraph, the skill must become more prominent, so I'd move them up. This would be my section order: Summary, Technical Skills, Professional Experience, Education

On the readability front:

Add white space. With the deletions that I suugest above, you'll have plenty of room to play with, even after adding the contact info. Add space between jobs and more space between sections. Also, you have room to increase all of the margins.

Reduce the amount of bolded text. The point of bolding is to draw attention to something important, but when so much is bolded, you draw attention to nothing. The indent levels should be meaningful, becasue as they stand now, they do not add to understanding.

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